Wednesday, April 1, 2009

love:a poem by an amateur poet and my reply :p

my friend wrote:
i still love love but love doesn't love me..
still miss love but love doesn't miss me.
.i still cry for love but love doesn't cry for me..
why is love so painful..
why is love so vulnerable..
why is love not mine..

my reply:
your heart wrote this,not your mind,
u said u can't make a poem,u said u can't rhyme!
u have a heart that beats too for a loved one,
your heart weeps for him,it wants to hold onto someone
someone so special,someone so beloved
u can do anything for him,alas!you've turned into a poet

9 31pm 30th march monday

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